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Reviewer Rating: ** Stars Title: Duty & Love Category: Science Fiction/Romance Author: J. Farris Publisher: DiskUs Publishing ISBN: 1-58495-218-0 Release date: September 2000
There are two schools of thought with writing. One is to read as much
as you can to appreciate various styles, learn rules and hone skills.
The other is to not read anything and develop your own style in a
vacuum. It means you have to teach yourself, and it also smacks of
intellectual laziness.
Duty of Love has all the hallmarks of falling into the latter category.
Science fiction requires the writer to be inventive and imaginative.
Duty and Love is set in the 22nd century where computers still have a
tangle of cables to attach and the main character has to get his dog to
type for him. The Macintosh airport, available NOW enables cable free
computing. Plus,
voice recognition software is widely used TODAY. By pointing out these
faults, I run the risk of coming across as a sci-fi snob or attracting
the wrath of the author. But I have to be honest, this book is really
ordinary.
The plot revolves around John De Lancy, an actor blinded in an accident
who adopts a seeing-eye neo-dog, Buffy, whom he falls in love with (and
not in the Platonic sense). Farris doesnıt sell the story with any
conviction, giving Buffy every outward appearance of a dog, except she
can talk, has nice boobs and shapely legs. The story is sickening,
especially the scene where John and Buffy bluntly discuss masturbation.
Considering just about every new scientific endeavour results in
outcries from "moral guardians", the concept of human/animal
sexual relations should be a match to the gas tank for community
outrage, but strangely not here.
As for character names, it seems Farris hasnıt looked too far for
inspiration. The main player is John De Lancy. What do you know? Thereıs
a real American actor called John De Lancie who plays Q in Star Trek,
The Next Generation. Was Buffy named after The Vampire Slayer? Buffy
talks lots.
Buffy talks in third person. Buffy annoying as hell. Buffy annoy people
more than Jar Jar Binks. This tedious child talk lasts for around 60
pages, then three months pass in the turn of a page and Buffy talks
normally.
The plot includes a "story within a story", where the main
character, John, writes a screenplay with Buffyıs encouragement.
"Finally, I shook my head. "Nah. I'm a washed up, blinded,
scarred actor, not a world-class screenwriter. What do I know about
writing?"
"You know what you would want to appear in. You know the type of
screenplay you'd die to be in. I believe in you. Try it. Please, master.
Try it."
"Well, all right."."
Not long after this lightning fast turn around in attitude, John knows
exactly how to deliver the goods:
"We spent a few days on the usual courtroom drama scenes audiences
expect to build the tension."
The irony is John knows what audiences want, but Farris is unable to
deliver it.
The pace and drama do improve around page 120, when Johnıs agent and
his ex-girlfriend get some action, but by then itıs too late This
excerpt, a few pages short of the finish, sums up the reading
experience:
"I tried to pay attention, even though after a few minutes, it was
incredibly dull."
If an author can't create a character who is interested in the world he
has created, how can he expect the reader to be interested?
Copyright İ 2001 by Ebony McKenna
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